Pandemic Prediction Checklist: H5N1
Pandemic Prediction Checklist: Monkeypox
Correlation may imply some sort of causal link.
For guessing its direction, simple models help you think.
Controlled experiments, if they are well beyond the brink
Of .05 significance will make your unknowns shrink.
Replications show there’s something new under the sun.
Did one cause the other? Did the other cause the one?
Are they both controlled by what has already begun?
Or was it their coincidence that caused it to be done?
Put your most important, concrete takeaways first, in a form anyone can understand. Write with authority. Put your methods, motives, and analysis details later.
Right now, I have to read too much text to figure out what you’re claiming and why it matters, even in the summary. For example, for your gargling paper, you could have led with:
“A few tiny studies show water gargling prevents illness, but I suspect publication bias is skewing the reported results. Notably, one paper showed long-term side effects from frequent gargling. In this review, I walk through the most important results and methods from each of these studies and discuss why I think there’s a risk of publication bias. For context, I’m an independent researcher with [relevant background qualifications] and this is a personal blog post, not traditional peer-reviewed research.”