I looked at your post:
I don’t think I ever saw it on the front page. If I did, I don’t think the title would have made it seem worth reading.
Reading the first few paragraphs: I’m not sure who this post is for, what problem is it addressing or why should I care in general. It’s referencing some specific chapter out of a book I never heard of.
It seems like a long post, so I just skip reading it.
I hope the suggestions are easy to derive from the above points.The writing is not amazing but I didn’t get LLM vibes.
It’s much easier for me not to say anything, but my model of Duncan would prefer for me to comment.
Overall strong upvote from me, but I’m not doing it because: what is up with the section about Zack Davis?? I’m not disputing the veracity here, because I don’t know. But it just doesn’t feel at all necessary or even useful to have it in this post. Just comes across as kind of petty. Kind if like writing The Inferno just so you can categorize and viscerally describe your enemies in hell.