The writing style feels a bit too polished and the structure is a bit too formal. Feels like it was written as an essay that will be graded. I think some of your usual humor / style is missing too, but that might be me reading too much into it at this point.
The writing style feels a bit too polished and the structure is a bit too formal. Feels like it was written as an essay that will be graded. I think some of your usual humor / style is missing too, but that might be me reading too much into it at this point.