First, I think this is a good article. However, I have a question about one of your premises:
“What is the problem?? How can you fail to recognize this! Do you not AGREE that DEATH IS BAD?”
Has anybody done a second-level analysis of what happens if we discover immortality tomorrow? While I’m not personally crazy about dying tomorrow, I think that, viewed from the perspective of an entire race, the answer is not so obvious. Despite the fact that Malthus was early with his prediction of widespread disaster, there is still some finite carrying capacity of the Earth. We’re already seeing clear effects from climate change with 8 billion people. If nobody dies, either we stop having children, or the population balloons very rapidly, putting more strain on our resources.
I’m old enough to have lived through the Green Revolution that provided fertilizer, seeds, and pesticides that dramatically increased what a farmer could produce. There are also plenty of other examples of big improvements in technology as well, so I don’t rule out the possibility that we could support an order of magnitude more people on the planet, but I also think it’s far from a given.
There is also the issue that you see in various research fields, politics, etc. Progress is said to happen one funeral at a time; if none of the senior people die, how do the younger ones ever move forward? Do we really want a thousand-year-old politician (of any stripe) still sitting in office? On the flip side, will the average worker who only does the job to make the pay want to continue working for centuries? If they don’t, who supports them? Do we end up like Logan’s Run and enforce maximum age limits?
I don’t know if any of these things are likely to be real problems, but failure to plan is planning to fail. So, I’m wondering if there are any good papers, articles, etc. that examine the societal and planetary consequences of immortality.
It feels as though you are arguing for two separate conclusions here. First you say you’re unhappy that your work is flagged as AI Generated when you don’t think that’s right.
Then you argue that AI writing has become better than human writing, so it would be wrong not to accept the edits.
It sounds like the only real issue here is that you disagree about where the line between “AI Generated” and “AI Assisted” should fall. That seems like a pretty subjective issue; some people could argue that automated spellcheck is AI Assisted, but that seems wrong to me. You are arguing that rewording a paragraph to be clearly different from the original is just assistance, but I disagree. While the two ends of the spectrum are clear (wrote it on a typewriter = 100% Human Written, gave Claude a prompt and published the result = 100% AI Generated), I think it’s reasonable for different people to have their own opinions about where the range for AI Assisted begins and ends.
So, other than asking for Pangram to provide a more transparent description of what the three ranges cover, I’m not sure what you think should change. Part of the problem may be that you like the collaboration between yourself and Claude but you don’t want to list it as a co-author or editor. I like books co-written by Larry Nivens and Jerry Pournelle, but I’d be unhappy if Jerry claimed to have written the whole novel without assistance.