With such a disclaimer, I think I would have been less confused but still not positive on the text. Maybe I’d be less negative? Neutral, even? A lack of disclaimer is not really the core of it for me though.
I have strange tastes in fiction, I think, and normally after reading something that anti-resonated with me so much, I’d just stop reading. But, I read to the end because a bunch of upvotes signaled to me that I might otherwise miss out on something later in the text.
I live in the Bay Area and work in tech and follow AI news. For me, I already knew that there are traits I don’t like in others, and had approximate models of their frequency in and correlations to the AI scene. Each character struck me as plausible and not really meaningfully more concrete to me. Concrete in the sense of “Oh, this behavior is warning sign that this is a morally bankrupt person I should stay away from” or “I might accidentally be falling into this pattern if I find this character relatable in some way.” I can definitely see this being useful to others who do not live in the bay area/work in tech/do not follow AI news, but I mostly expected people on lesswrong to match enough of that description that they wouldn’t find themselves learning from this “concretely describing a vibe or something.” And indeed, some of the people liked it for reasons other than that, which I failed to predict!
A big part of it for me is that I just cannot stand the first person narration of this main character. An example line, pulled at random: “But regardless, she makes very good coffee and is very nice and beautiful which sometimes amounts to the same thing.” I find this thoroughly jarring. I read it as the character’s internal monologue, but this is just so thoroughly outside the domain of what would go in my own internal monologue it feels… rude? an empty attempt at caricature? a failure to understand what internal thoughts look like or otherwise an indication of a mind horribly alien to my own such that it bears no resemblance to real humans? I do find the characters unappealing, but this just seemed unnecessary to me.
It is quite strange to me that you would describe this story as “light and pleasant.” I can understand funny/absurd for the right sense of humor that is not mine.