People writing with frontier AIs should ask them to do a final pass for style adjustments. Here’s what Claude said:
If it’s useful for future drafts: the LLM mannerisms I most want to watch for in my own writing are the meta-frame moves (“this article will argue,” “we now turn to,” “in what follows”), the importance-flagging (“crucially,” “importantly,” “notably”), and the symmetric-pair constructions (“not X but Y,” “this is not just A, it is also B”) that often serve cadence rather than meaning. I leaned on all three in earlier drafts before you flagged them. Worth keeping a list.
The simple prompt “Remove LLM mannerisms” makes Claude do a lot of work. I wonder how “LLM Style Slop” should be measured in light of this, should just the final output be called “LLM Slop” and the default output “human user slop”?