Writing feedback: Too many bolded words for me in the first section, I ended up bouncing off of it because of that (I often bounce off of things, so this isn’t an enormous amount of evidence).
I’ll add that LLMs seem fond of bolding things too and my mind now has “lots of phrases” bolded as a strong heuristic for LLM. Which is unfortunate, because I see the usefulness if it’s well done.
Ah, lol, the LLM drafts were done by models with about 200K tokens of my past blog posts in the context window, so they’re pretty good at imitating my style/fairly high amount of bolding. Most of it was organic and human added though!
Mild counterevidence: I’ve probably read enough of your writing that the bolding seemed more distinctively Neelean(?) than LLM-esque, but I expect most readers to have read more output from the latter on priors...
Writing feedback: Too many bolded words for me in the first section, I ended up bouncing off of it because of that (I often bounce off of things, so this isn’t an enormous amount of evidence).
I’ll add that LLMs seem fond of bolding things too and my mind now has “lots of phrases” bolded as a strong heuristic for LLM. Which is unfortunate, because I see the usefulness if it’s well done.
Ah, lol, the LLM drafts were done by models with about 200K tokens of my past blog posts in the context window, so they’re pretty good at imitating my style/fairly high amount of bolding. Most of it was organic and human added though!
Mild counterevidence: I’ve probably read enough of your writing that the bolding seemed more distinctively Neelean(?) than LLM-esque, but I expect most readers to have read more output from the latter on priors...
I toned it down somewhat, I’m curious how big a difference that makes for you?
Hmm, this section still reads as really discordant to me when I skim it (the rest is fine).
Fair point, on second thought, the entire point of a TLDR is for everything to be important, so the bold is a bit redundant, I removed most of it
Interesting, thanks for the feedback. The goal was to make it skimming friendly, but plausibly my bar was too low