If you’re trying to come across as sane, safe, reasonable and trustworthy in the future, my advice would be to try to write a little more normally. It’s fine if you want to become a dragon in the future, really. I just don’t see why it’s relevant to the topics at hand. Another example, and this is a little mean to say, but I don’t see why it’s necessary to go on for multiple paragraphs of purple prose describing your hopes and aspirations for humanity.
I’m sorry if the reason you brought these things up is that they are very important to your identity. But many people entertain transhumanist fantasies of body modification or have utopian hopes for the future of the world. The impression I am getting from this post is of someone who is lost in their own head, someone who has adopted a very insular frame and doesn’t feel comfortable stepping outside of it. Writing in a more ordinary fashion would go a little ways to put people like me at ease that you’re grounded in reality.
I would also try to avoid unnecessary jargon and references, especially to works of fanfiction. Yes, it’s true that intellectual communities often develop these ways of marking members of an ingroup. But if people are constantly mistaking you for a cultist, it’s probably best to lay off the esotericism.
Thanks for this post, very interesting.
It should be obvious that the Venus of Willendorf is late in the game, because Subsaharan Africans diverged from Eurasians well before the Upper Paleolithic, something like ~70-100k years ago iirc, with some African groups having even earlier dates.
Perhaps I’m misunderstanding something, but I don’t see why the sexual selection story has to be tied to a post-Neanderthal divergence date. Modern humans are diagnosed in the fossil record by their skull shapes and there’s no particular reason to assume that the development of modern looking skulls would have happened at the same time as other anatomical features