If you’re really talking about MOOCs and price is a minor adjunct to that, you should mention MOOCs first.
Reasonable. I like presenting it as “we have X trend which was becoming increasingly unsustainable and is now being challenged by Y trend” but if people are finding it confusing I should edit. Is it confusing to other people?
If you’re really talking about MOOCs and price is a minor adjunct to that, you should mention MOOCs first.
Reasonable. I like presenting it as “we have X trend which was becoming increasingly unsustainable and is now being challenged by Y trend” but if people are finding it confusing I should edit. Is it confusing to other people?