Come on, make your critiques in the straightforward way, and use normal words to express them. I think this being kind of socially focused is a valid critique, but you are coating it in sneering language that feels obnoxious.
Come on, make your critiques in the straightforward way, and use normal words to express them. I think this being kind of socially focused is a valid critique, but you are coating it in sneering language that feels obnoxious.