I take your point, I think it needs a rewrite, I have not been nearly clear enough, and your notes are helpful in pointing me to areas I need to clarify. I have replies to your points here, but I should get my ducks-in-a-row before making them, so I don’t end up contradicting myself. Thanks for your comment.
I take your point, I think it needs a rewrite, I have not been nearly clear enough, and your notes are helpful in pointing me to areas I need to clarify. I have replies to your points here, but I should get my ducks-in-a-row before making them, so I don’t end up contradicting myself. Thanks for your comment.