Promoted to the frontpage, with hesitations: I think this post is good and highlights important things.
I do think especially the first section before the first proper paragraph reads too much as a call to action, and somehow made me feel like something was being demanded from me.
That’s certainly not accidental. I think I came off to you slightly stronger than I intended, but only slightly. If I’d been writing for LW as the primary target, I’d have watered it down. It’s definitely a call to action.
Promoted to the frontpage, with hesitations: I think this post is good and highlights important things.
I do think especially the first section before the first proper paragraph reads too much as a call to action, and somehow made me feel like something was being demanded from me.
That’s certainly not accidental. I think I came off to you slightly stronger than I intended, but only slightly. If I’d been writing for LW as the primary target, I’d have watered it down. It’s definitely a call to action.
Or at least, a call to inaction.