I think the main “hook” of your post was this: “There is a preconception that LLM-written prose is bad… But if you do X, Y and Z, it can become much better”. When people read this kind of hook and then don’t see any convincing examples, they will be disappointed, even you weren’t about to go in that direction and really wanted to show something else.
Thanks, that’s a good point. I’d intended that line more as a disclaimer that “yeah I know that LLM writing tends bad by default, I’m not crazy enough to claim otherwise” rather than as a hook, but re-reading, it sure comes off as a hook.
I guess upon reflection I was a bit muddled on what exactly my intent with this post was in the first place, it’s somewhat a personal sharing of what’s been going on with me and somewhat a sharing of tricks but I didn’t have a very clear target audience in mind.
I think the main “hook” of your post was this: “There is a preconception that LLM-written prose is bad… But if you do X, Y and Z, it can become much better”. When people read this kind of hook and then don’t see any convincing examples, they will be disappointed, even you weren’t about to go in that direction and really wanted to show something else.
Thanks, that’s a good point. I’d intended that line more as a disclaimer that “yeah I know that LLM writing tends bad by default, I’m not crazy enough to claim otherwise” rather than as a hook, but re-reading, it sure comes off as a hook.
I guess upon reflection I was a bit muddled on what exactly my intent with this post was in the first place, it’s somewhat a personal sharing of what’s been going on with me and somewhat a sharing of tricks but I didn’t have a very clear target audience in mind.