I want to try to figure out what minimum change to the summary / metaphor would make it relatively unobjectionable to you.
As an example of a shape-based conceptual explanation of misalignment that I endorse, see the section on “Models Often Get Good Performance in Unexpected Ways” in Ajeya Cotra’s “Why AI Alignment Could Be Hard with Modern Deep Learning”. (I regret that I couldn’t find the link the other month when this thread was alive, or I would have used it then.) It’s good because Cotra is giving a specific example of a way that neural networks might generalize unexpectedly (by color when you might have expected shape) and links to the relevant research; it’s not just a handwavy metaphor that the reader is supposed to accept on her authority.
I’m not sure I believe in the distinction you’re making. Amodei is the CEO of a half-trillion dollar company. Sounds like a generic rich asshole to me; I don’t see why the revolution should treat him any differently than the other кулаки́. Is the difference supposed to be that he talks a better game about humanity and the common good than Travis Kalanick types? You can’t be that gullible, comrade!
The powerful don’t need the powerless now, so why are they still alive? It’s not just that 15% of the government’s budget goes to welfare. The state barely even kills criminals anymore! Why?
That’s not just a rhetorical question; it’s a literal one that you should be able to answer if you want to persuade people of your worldview. (If it’s to buy votes, felons already can’t vote, so that doesn’t explain all the millions that go to food and housing and judicial appeals for criminals when bullets are so much cheaper. Or rope—you could re-use the rope.)
To be sure, life on welfare in today’s world sucks compared to my life or that of Travis Kalanick. If I were God-Empress of the universe, I’d prefer better for all sentient life. But the realistic relative techno-optimist argument isn’t that all men will be brothers in the Singularity; it’s that giving humanity a nice retirement would cost pennies in a world of nanotechnological abundance, such that making the nano-abundance happen at all matters way more than whether Sam Altman has a billion more yachts than you. Sam Altman probably already has more yachts than me, and it feels fine.