Edit: the author has clarified that their post is meant as an introduction to a larger work, so it would make sense for them to introduce their view alongside others’ without justifying why just yet.
This was interesting. I enjoyed reading it. However,
Let us accept some version of Alexander’s eschaton: the final level of the Reality Game is beaten by compelling or convincing a “god” (either a machine god or an actual divine being) to transform the cosmos into an everlasting paradisal garden. How will we win—through work (coercion or argument) or through līlā, through rational intelligence or creative mêtis?
This paragraph confuses me. First you’re saying:
“ok, let’s think about Alexander’s ‘gardener’ solution to the problem”,
then you ask the question:
“how do we solve the problem on our own?” (meaning without the ‘gardener’)
These belong to different branches of discussion (from one view.../on the other hand...), but the second part is presented as though it’s salient to the first. It scans as if the author forgot what he was thinking partway through, and picked up on a different thread.
Am I being excessively pedantic? well,
this stuck out to me, because usually when different views are presented in a text (from one view.../on the other hand...), the author must decide in favour of one (or none) of the those presented, and explain why. This, the author has not done. Which is strange, given the apparent effort (and I believe, evident skill) this essay represents.
The above paragraph marks the part where the author is finally offering their own opinion, having explored those of others. Except it begins in just the place where we expected them to explain why they disagree with Alexander. Which should be the most interesting part, because this is Lesswrong, the place with
unusually strong norms around how people should form their beliefs, and
unusually high frequency of people who disagree with the Author’s conclusion vehemently.
Why? why do you think this, and not that?
Oh! In light of that, my criticism is diminished. I’ll edit my comment to reflect this.
I really want to believe that the hopes you express are well founded. But, I also want to believe what’s true. LW taught me to be (cutious/skeptical) when this happens, that’s why I was critical. I hope that my comment was useful as feedback, if not as critique.