I wasn’t referring to you specifically, so much as the train of thought extending from:
One more small issue: “”What?” hissed the Potions Master” is problematic because “What?” lacks s sounds. I don’t think Quirrell knows Parseltongue.
That definitely seems like overthinking to me, considering how commonly someone hisses in literature.
Though I admit, it would be a great security precaution—which is precisely why Quirrel and Harry do so when the topic is sensitive, as has been said.
I wasn’t referring to you specifically, so much as the train of thought extending from:
That definitely seems like overthinking to me, considering how commonly someone hisses in literature.
Though I admit, it would be a great security precaution—which is precisely why Quirrel and Harry do so when the topic is sensitive, as has been said.