I mean I can’t tell from the article whether you’re recommending a change in ends (and if so, based on what) or means (and if so, based on what). I don’t see a path from your recommended actions to any ends that I know of and share.
Declaring the ends you’re expecting me to support, and a path from your recommendation to those ends would let me give more specific critiques (or simply to join your campaign if you’re right).
I mean I can’t tell from the article whether you’re recommending a change in ends (and if so, based on what) or means (and if so, based on what). I don’t see a path from your recommended actions to any ends that I know of and share.
Declaring the ends you’re expecting me to support, and a path from your recommendation to those ends would let me give more specific critiques (or simply to join your campaign if you’re right).