There’s a tangentially related comment by Scott Alexander from over a decade ago, on the subject of writing advice, which I still think about from time to time:
The best way to improve the natural flow of ideas, and your writing in general, is to read really good writers so much that you unconsciously pick up their turns of phrase and don’t even realize when you’re using them. The best time to do that is when you’re eight years old; the second best time is now.
Your role models here should be those vampires who hunt down the talented, suck out their souls, and absorb their powers. Which writers’ souls you feast upon depends on your own natural style and your goals. I’ve gained most from reading Eliezer, Mencius Moldbug, Aleister Crowley, and G.K. Chesterton (links go to writing samples from each I consider particularly good); I’m currently making my way through Chesterton’s collected works pretty much with the sole aim of imprinting his writing style into my brain.
Stepping from the sublime to the ridiculous, I took a lot from reading Dave Barry when I was a child. He has a very observational sense of humor, the sort where instead of going out looking for jokes, he just writes about a topic and it ends up funny. It’s not hard to copy if you’re familiar enough with it. And if you can be funny, people will read you whether you have any other redeeming qualities or not.
Getting imprinted with good writers like this will serve you for your entire life. It will serve you whether you’re on your fiftieth draft of a thesis paper, or you’re rushing a Less Wrong comment in the three minutes before you have to go to work. It will even serve you in regular old non-written conversation, because wit and clarity are independent of medium.
Thinking of myself as a vampire hunting down the talented and feasting on their souls to absorb their powers is somewhat dramatic, but vividly memorable...
There’s a tangentially related comment by Scott Alexander from over a decade ago, on the subject of writing advice, which I still think about from time to time:
Thinking of myself as a vampire hunting down the talented and feasting on their souls to absorb their powers is somewhat dramatic, but vividly memorable...
That’s a great qoute!