I personally have not seen that style of writing dialogue before, and did not recognize that was what you were doing until reading this comment from you. It along with the typos made it difficult for me to understand, so I had Claude copy edit it for me (and then figured maybe someone else would find that useful).
I personally have not seen that style of writing dialogue before, and did not recognize that was what you were doing until reading this comment from you. It along with the typos made it difficult for me to understand, so I had Claude copy edit it for me (and then figured maybe someone else would find that useful).