You mean the chevrons like this is non-standard, but also sub-standard, although it has the neat property to represent >Speaker one< and >>Speaker two<<? I can see the typography of those here is meh at best.-\
I personally have not seen that style of writing dialogue before, and did not recognize that was what you were doing until reading this comment from you. It along with the typos made it difficult for me to understand, so I had Claude copy edit it for me (and then figured maybe someone else would find that useful).
You mean the chevrons like this is non-standard, but also sub-standard, although it has the neat property to represent >Speaker one< and >>Speaker two<<? I can see the typography of those here is meh at best.-\
I personally have not seen that style of writing dialogue before, and did not recognize that was what you were doing until reading this comment from you. It along with the typos made it difficult for me to understand, so I had Claude copy edit it for me (and then figured maybe someone else would find that useful).