I got confused, too. I think I interpreted it to mean that the Kass acolyte was criticizing KS, but you hadn’t included the quote; so I stopped reading and started scanning for a link to the source.
I would have found it easier if you had inserted “Actually,” before “The quote is a...”
Do lots of articles play games with the cut? It probably would have been clearer to me if I’d read it with the cut. Maybe you could imitate the effect with an HR tag?
OK, good point— I’ve edited to make it much less ambiguous. I recall another article or two playing with deceit above the cut, and then revealing the trick below, but it’s difficult to find them.
I got confused, too. I think I interpreted it to mean that the Kass acolyte was criticizing KS, but you hadn’t included the quote; so I stopped reading and started scanning for a link to the source.
I would have found it easier if you had inserted “Actually,” before “The quote is a...”
Do lots of articles play games with the cut? It probably would have been clearer to me if I’d read it with the cut. Maybe you could imitate the effect with an HR tag?
OK, good point— I’ve edited to make it much less ambiguous. I recall another article or two playing with deceit above the cut, and then revealing the trick below, but it’s difficult to find them.