On the Sagan quote they both felt like clichéd meandering dross on the theme of “universe big, human small, emotions, wow” but the AI picked something a bit more concrete by reference to the calcium in bones (although as kbear mentions above, that is itself a cheap knockoff of a different Sagan quote)
On the Wolf Hall excerpt, the human version just felt a bit vague to me. Everything by halves; half light, half seen. Do people actually go around pouring all their fears and desires into someone who just happens to have a good poker face? Whereas the AI was more specific about writing multiple meanings into text.
I’m with you on the other three though; the AI version was just plain bad.
3⁄5 human preference for me.
On the Sagan quote they both felt like clichéd meandering dross on the theme of “universe big, human small, emotions, wow” but the AI picked something a bit more concrete by reference to the calcium in bones (although as kbear mentions above, that is itself a cheap knockoff of a different Sagan quote)
On the Wolf Hall excerpt, the human version just felt a bit vague to me. Everything by halves; half light, half seen. Do people actually go around pouring all their fears and desires into someone who just happens to have a good poker face? Whereas the AI was more specific about writing multiple meanings into text.
I’m with you on the other three though; the AI version was just plain bad.