If you look at your last post on LessWrong it starts with:
“We are on the brink of the unimaginable. Humanity is about to cross a threshold that will redefine life as we know it: the creation of intelligence surpassing our own. This is not science fiction—it’s unfolding right now, within our lifetimes. The ripple effects of this seismic event will alter every aspect of society, culture, and existence itself, faster than most can comprehend.”
The use of bold is more typical of AI writing. The ‘:’ happens much more in AI writing. The emdash happens much more in AI writing, especially with “is not a X it’s a Y”.
Emdashes used to be a sign of high-quality writing where a writer is thoughtful enough to know how to use an emdash. Today, it’s a sign of low-quality LLM writing.
It’s also much more narrative driven than the usual opening paragraph of a LessWrong post.
Another one I’ve seen is the use of ‘Not A, But B’ statements. “This is not just an existential crisis. It’s a full-blown catastrophe.”
OP’s writing also contained something like that: “This is not science fiction—it’s unfolding right now, within our lifetimes.” It’s a shame, because it is not a bad sentence structure. But, like with emdashes, you now have to monitor your writing for overuse of logic like this.
If you look at your last post on LessWrong it starts with:
The use of bold is more typical of AI writing. The ‘:’ happens much more in AI writing. The emdash happens much more in AI writing, especially with “is not a X it’s a Y”.
Emdashes used to be a sign of high-quality writing where a writer is thoughtful enough to know how to use an emdash. Today, it’s a sign of low-quality LLM writing.
It’s also much more narrative driven than the usual opening paragraph of a LessWrong post.
Another one I’ve seen is the use of ‘Not A, But B’ statements.
“This is not just an existential crisis. It’s a full-blown catastrophe.”
OP’s writing also contained something like that: “This is not science fiction—it’s unfolding right now, within our lifetimes.” It’s a shame, because it is not a bad sentence structure. But, like with emdashes, you now have to monitor your writing for overuse of logic like this.