The twist ending (everyone just believes it) certainly came as a surprise. I guess I do wonder how in the world they were that confused if they were that open to logic and evidence. But I tend to be a lot more focused on story logic than most readers. I guess there are a lot of different aspects of stories one could focus on or not.
The twist ending (everyone just believes it) certainly came as a surprise. I guess I do wonder how in the world they were that confused if they were that open to logic and evidence. But I tend to be a lot more focused on story logic than most readers. I guess there are a lot of different aspects of stories one could focus on or not.
Heh that is actually a plot hole I realised existed only after I wrote it. It’s certainly no HPMOR but I hope you liked it :)