Note for guitar rather than voice: I think the chorus where you have all Ds, you could be alternating (in between spoken lines) with some other chord that adds more variety.
(fake edit: actually maybe have the main chord for that section be G, alternating with D in between lines?)
Yeah, this version works much better.
Note for guitar rather than voice: I think the chorus where you have all Ds, you could be alternating (in between spoken lines) with some other chord that adds more variety.
(fake edit: actually maybe have the main chord for that section be G, alternating with D in between lines?)