I love the jumbled version of Siddhartha’s story in your opening. For narrative purposes, I’d just add you seeing the first three of the Four Sights (an old man, a sick man, and a dead man) without any kind mental anguish before the breakfast with your toddlers that made you walk away from the Bodhi tree and renounce meditation and “enlightment.”
I love the jumbled version of Siddhartha’s story in your opening. For narrative purposes, I’d just add you seeing the first three of the Four Sights (an old man, a sick man, and a dead man) without any kind mental anguish before the breakfast with your toddlers that made you walk away from the Bodhi tree and renounce meditation and “enlightment.”