Minor feedback – I got ~2/3 through, took a break, came back to the post and had trouble finding my place. If there were section headers that formed a table of contents it’d be somewhat easier to get back into it. (though I’m not sure how intentional it was to not have headers, or whether you consider that doing some kinda important stylistic work)
Minor feedback – I got ~2/3 through, took a break, came back to the post and had trouble finding my place. If there were section headers that formed a table of contents it’d be somewhat easier to get back into it. (though I’m not sure how intentional it was to not have headers, or whether you consider that doing some kinda important stylistic work)