Occasionally the writing and sentence structure can feel a little hurried, especially at the beginning of chapters. It’s as if Eliezer starts writing at the beginning of a chapter but takes a while to fully get into his rhythm. There have also probably been a few too many tangents from the main plot, but Eliezer’s latest author note seems to acknowledge this.
Occasionally the writing and sentence structure can feel a little hurried, especially at the beginning of chapters. It’s as if Eliezer starts writing at the beginning of a chapter but takes a while to fully get into his rhythm. There have also probably been a few too many tangents from the main plot, but Eliezer’s latest author note seems to acknowledge this.