Something about this made me faintly nauseated. Great job!
Also the character being Sarah had me in mind of Labyrinth as in the 80s film, but there was in the end no rescue forthcoming from Ludo or Hoggle or Sir Didymus.
I’m really sorry about that- I had wondered if I should put some content warnings on the story, but I couldn’t figure out what categories would be included in such a warning. Existential horror?
No apology required. Honestly just intended as a compliment, to illustrate that you must be doing something right, to provoke a visceral reaction. Akin to how a particularly tense action scene might raise the reader’s heart rate—but located in a different organ.
Something about this made me faintly nauseated. Great job!
Also the character being Sarah had me in mind of Labyrinth as in the 80s film, but there was in the end no rescue forthcoming from Ludo or Hoggle or Sir Didymus.
I’m really sorry about that- I had wondered if I should put some content warnings on the story, but I couldn’t figure out what categories would be included in such a warning. Existential horror?
No apology required. Honestly just intended as a compliment, to illustrate that you must be doing something right, to provoke a visceral reaction. Akin to how a particularly tense action scene might raise the reader’s heart rate—but located in a different organ.
Then thank you!