You sound like you don’t know that Gatsby was written during the period it chronicles. I don’t expect that this will have a large effect on your reading, but some of the details in the long version of your slogan are definitely off.
You sound like you don’t know that Gatsby was written during the period it chronicles. I don’t expect that this will have a large effect on your reading, but some of the details in the long version of your slogan are definitely off.