This is pretty good. I would go through, though, and either reduce, make subtler, or preferably just remove all the parts that would make a LW reader go ‘Hey! I read that blog post.’
Or alternatively provide links/references at the end for people who haven’t read them.
This is pretty good. I would go through, though, and either reduce, make subtler, or preferably just remove all the parts that would make a LW reader go ‘Hey! I read that blog post.’
Or alternatively provide links/references at the end for people who haven’t read them.