Hm, looking at it a second time I think you are right. It was just that as I reread the text, I was like “oh oh this is important too!”. Gregory Cochran says in one page what some people need an entire chapter to say.
Ok I’ve edited my emphasis, is it any better?
Much improved.
Hm, looking at it a second time I think you are right. It was just that as I reread the text, I was like “oh oh this is important too!”. Gregory Cochran says in one page what some people need an entire chapter to say.
Ok I’ve edited my emphasis, is it any better?
Much improved.