Wow. Reading that story now. You can see how Eliezer’s writing style has changed. But his ability to come up with amazingly clever modifications of existing works is already there.
Edit: And there’s only one chapter? Really? That’s sort of sad. Hmm,
V qb unir gb jbaqre vs gur Thneqvna Ornfg vf fhccbfrq gb or Uboorf.
Wow. Reading that story now. You can see how Eliezer’s writing style has changed. But his ability to come up with amazingly clever modifications of existing works is already there.
Edit: And there’s only one chapter? Really? That’s sort of sad. Hmm,
V qb unir gb jbaqre vs gur Thneqvna Ornfg vf fhccbfrq gb or Uboorf.
I don’t actually know whether that’s old or not. It says it was posted in 2010.
Gung jnf zl thrff nf jryy.
Either way, it’s a very clever fic.