ah, I misused a react because there wasn’t a “we already covered this” button. The person who in my opinion had already covered that paragraph about remaining moves is Thane.
More generally I have the sense that folks here in general have written similar things to much of this, and so the difficulty for me in making use of this post is isolating what new insight you’re communicating. What I’d do is take one paragraph at a time of your post and dump them into https://search.metaphor.systems/ and see what comes up. (Metaphor’s design is much better suited to this than most other search engines, I don’t know of another that would allow this same use style.) I might also filter to only allow lesswrong.com or greaterwrong.com links in the results.
my “reads like I wrote it” is a comment that I also have an overly dense, overly repetitive style, and so I come to you with critiques that are often applicable to me as well ;P
ah, I misused a react because there wasn’t a “we already covered this” button. The person who in my opinion had already covered that paragraph about remaining moves is Thane.
More generally I have the sense that folks here in general have written similar things to much of this, and so the difficulty for me in making use of this post is isolating what new insight you’re communicating. What I’d do is take one paragraph at a time of your post and dump them into https://search.metaphor.systems/ and see what comes up. (Metaphor’s design is much better suited to this than most other search engines, I don’t know of another that would allow this same use style.) I might also filter to only allow lesswrong.com or greaterwrong.com links in the results.
my “reads like I wrote it” is a comment that I also have an overly dense, overly repetitive style, and so I come to you with critiques that are often applicable to me as well ;P
Thanks for your feedback. Yeah, people really seem to dislike it