Harry is usually rather good avoiding making reckless commitments but he seems to have thrown that caution away. I refer here, of course, to the non-interference treaty he proposed with Hermione.
Really? His commitment to Draco regarding Dumbledore is at least as reckless.
That is exactly what springs to mind as an example of how Harry usually goes about making commitments. In that case he was sane enough to mention all of 5 disclaimers, and at a time when Draco was more emotionally destabilized than Hermione is here. I suggest he could have managed to casually include just one this time.
Wrote the quadruple-disclaimerized version of that conversation, deleted the disclaimers because it didn’t flow as writing. Justification: Harry finds it very easy to imagine that Hermione is just as terrified of losing control as he is, even though that’s not quite what’s going on at the other end.
Should I vote this comment down because I wish you really had put the disclaimers in there and don’t find the justification satisfying? (Answer to my own question: no.)
Should I vote this comment down because I wish you really had put the disclaimers in there and don’t find the justification satisfying? (Answer to my own question: no.)
I voted it up because at least he acknowledged he tried. I’m going to pretend I didn’t read the justification—it’s terrible!
Yes, this alone (just the part that I quoted) is enough to vote it up, on the principle that one votes up what one would like to see more of. Thanks for reminding me to do that!
Really? His commitment to Draco regarding Dumbledore is at least as reckless.
That is exactly what springs to mind as an example of how Harry usually goes about making commitments. In that case he was sane enough to mention all of 5 disclaimers, and at a time when Draco was more emotionally destabilized than Hermione is here. I suggest he could have managed to casually include just one this time.
Wrote the quadruple-disclaimerized version of that conversation, deleted the disclaimers because it didn’t flow as writing. Justification: Harry finds it very easy to imagine that Hermione is just as terrified of losing control as he is, even though that’s not quite what’s going on at the other end.
Should I vote this comment down because I wish you really had put the disclaimers in there and don’t find the justification satisfying? (Answer to my own question: no.)
I voted it up because at least he acknowledged he tried. I’m going to pretend I didn’t read the justification—it’s terrible!
Yes, this alone (just the part that I quoted) is enough to vote it up, on the principle that one votes up what one would like to see more of. Thanks for reminding me to do that!
Glad to hear that! And I can certainly imagine 4 disclaimers not fitting there at all. (One, on the other hand, mentioned as an afterthought...)