This seems like the potential for a pretty good advice listicle (if you like that genre) but the formatting is pretty rough and makes me feel not quite respected in choosing to read the post. Inconsistent capitalization, inconsistently full-sentences/half-sentences/not-sentences, and something about the bullets and headings being ugly.
This seems like the potential for a pretty good advice listicle (if you like that genre) but the formatting is pretty rough and makes me feel not quite respected in choosing to read the post. Inconsistent capitalization, inconsistently full-sentences/half-sentences/not-sentences, and something about the bullets and headings being ugly.
Understood, i would make it more intelligible