The “hard work” approach to making this post better:
Read what other people have written about the subject. What treatments of the subject are regarded as influential? Try and read those. Make a list of things they mention that you haven’t. Briefly research to see if their points are worthwhile, and if so add them to your list of topics.
Take the topics one at a time. Make an outline of the logical structure of your points within the section and tie up loose ends and think up new ones until you have enough material to write at least 3 times its original length. Research everything you see that people care about and can be researched, and be prepared to change your mind—yes, changing what you’ve already written—if the research doesn’t bear out your conjectures. Write new words about the topic roughly equal to its length.
Then once you understand your topics, map out the logical structure of your post. What things do you think have the most impact? What things are low impact, and so can be discussed in just a few sentences? How are different sections connected? Can you research the connections? Do so. Arrange the sections so that connected things go together, and put subheadings not at each topic, but at each group of topics. Start writing—you can base your post on the new words you wrote, but not on your old words.
The “hard work” approach to making this post better:
Read what other people have written about the subject. What treatments of the subject are regarded as influential? Try and read those. Make a list of things they mention that you haven’t. Briefly research to see if their points are worthwhile, and if so add them to your list of topics.
Take the topics one at a time. Make an outline of the logical structure of your points within the section and tie up loose ends and think up new ones until you have enough material to write at least 3 times its original length. Research everything you see that people care about and can be researched, and be prepared to change your mind—yes, changing what you’ve already written—if the research doesn’t bear out your conjectures. Write new words about the topic roughly equal to its length.
Then once you understand your topics, map out the logical structure of your post. What things do you think have the most impact? What things are low impact, and so can be discussed in just a few sentences? How are different sections connected? Can you research the connections? Do so. Arrange the sections so that connected things go together, and put subheadings not at each topic, but at each group of topics. Start writing—you can base your post on the new words you wrote, but not on your old words.