This reads like a bad grade school essay
That’s a bit harsh—more like a typical grade school essay, i.e. where you’re rewarded for length and vocabulary, and not particularly for scholarship or insight or evidence.
So you’re both right. A typical grade school essay is a bad essay. ;)
That’s a bit harsh—more like a typical grade school essay, i.e. where you’re rewarded for length and vocabulary, and not particularly for scholarship or insight or evidence.
So you’re both right. A typical grade school essay is a bad essay. ;)