I find the last paragraph (of the quoted post, not yours) very confusing. Yes, it sounds poetic, but it’s not really generating any coherent imagery for me.
The other paragraphs are okay, but still seem a bit pretentiously purple for the kinds of points they’re making. Not as deep and well-written as it thinks it is, and possibly just applause lights for people who think they like truth.
I find the last paragraph (of the quoted post, not yours) very confusing. Yes, it sounds poetic, but it’s not really generating any coherent imagery for me.
The other paragraphs are okay, but still seem a bit pretentiously purple for the kinds of points they’re making. Not as deep and well-written as it thinks it is, and possibly just applause lights for people who think they like truth.