The fact that many LessWrongers have read and enjoyed it indicates it’s not too verbose for the target audience.
Or else the audience is self-selecting so that the people who read it don’t find it too verbose...
Good point, thanks. Konkvistador indicates it was too verbose for him/her.
Or else the audience is self-selecting so that the people who read it don’t find it too verbose...
Good point, thanks. Konkvistador indicates it was too verbose for him/her.