This isn’t at all a settled question internally; some folks at MIRI prefer the ‘international agreement’ language, and some prefer the ‘treaty’ language, and the contents of the proposals (basically only one of which is currently public, the treaty from the online resources for the book) vary (some) based on whether it’s a treaty or an international agreement, since they’re different instruments.
Afaict the mechanism by which NatSec folks think treaty proposals are ‘unserious’ is that treaties are the lay term for the class of objects (and are a heavy lift in a way most lay treaty-advocates don’t understand). So if you say “treaty” and somehow indicate that you in fact know what that is, it mitigates the effect significantly.
I think most TGT outputs are going to use the international agreement language, since they’re our ‘next steps’ arm (you usually get some international agreement ahead of a treaty; I currently expect a lot of sentences like “An international agreement and, eventually, a treaty” in future TGT outputs).
My current understanding is that Nate wanted to emphasize what would actually be sufficient by his lights, looked into the differences in the various types of instruments, and landed back on treaty, which is generally in line with the ‘end points’ emphasis of the book project as a whole.
In the >a dozen interactions where we brought this up with our most authoritative NatSec contact (many of which I was present for), he did not vomit blood even once!
It’s definitely plausible the treaty draft associated with the book is taking some hits here, but I think this was weighed against ’well, if we tell them what we want, and we actually get it, and it’s too weak, that’s a loss.” Strategically, I would not endorse everyone operating from that frame, but I do endorse it existing as part of the portfolio of approaches here, and am glad to support MIRI as the org in the room most willing to make that kind of call.
I’m glad Buck is calling this out, so that other actors don’t blindly follow the book’s lead and deploy ‘treaty’ unwisely.
(I think Ray’s explanation is coherent with mine, but speaks to the experience of someone who only saw something like ‘user-facing-book-side’, whereas I was in a significant subset of the conversations where this was being discussed internally, although never with Nate, so I wouldn’t be shocked if he’s seeing it differently.)
This isn’t at all a settled question internally; some folks at MIRI prefer the ‘international agreement’ language, and some prefer the ‘treaty’ language, and the contents of the proposals (basically only one of which is currently public, the treaty from the online resources for the book) vary (some) based on whether it’s a treaty or an international agreement, since they’re different instruments.
Afaict the mechanism by which NatSec folks think treaty proposals are ‘unserious’ is that treaties are the lay term for the class of objects (and are a heavy lift in a way most lay treaty-advocates don’t understand). So if you say “treaty” and somehow indicate that you in fact know what that is, it mitigates the effect significantly.
I think most TGT outputs are going to use the international agreement language, since they’re our ‘next steps’ arm (you usually get some international agreement ahead of a treaty; I currently expect a lot of sentences like “An international agreement and, eventually, a treaty” in future TGT outputs).
My current understanding is that Nate wanted to emphasize what would actually be sufficient by his lights, looked into the differences in the various types of instruments, and landed back on treaty, which is generally in line with the ‘end points’ emphasis of the book project as a whole.
In the >a dozen interactions where we brought this up with our most authoritative NatSec contact (many of which I was present for), he did not vomit blood even once!
It’s definitely plausible the treaty draft associated with the book is taking some hits here, but I think this was weighed against ’well, if we tell them what we want, and we actually get it, and it’s too weak, that’s a loss.” Strategically, I would not endorse everyone operating from that frame, but I do endorse it existing as part of the portfolio of approaches here, and am glad to support MIRI as the org in the room most willing to make that kind of call.
I’m glad Buck is calling this out, so that other actors don’t blindly follow the book’s lead and deploy ‘treaty’ unwisely.
(I think Ray’s explanation is coherent with mine, but speaks to the experience of someone who only saw something like ‘user-facing-book-side’, whereas I was in a significant subset of the conversations where this was being discussed internally, although never with Nate, so I wouldn’t be shocked if he’s seeing it differently.)