https://docs.google.com/document/d/1srS9BmiWh3DY2FSlkVe3FHhk_cHX_mIIkPxXeOhBfgk/edit?usp=sharing
Some edit comments. Good piece as a whole, very few suggestions.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1srS9BmiWh3DY2FSlkVe3FHhk_cHX_mIIkPxXeOhBfgk/edit?usp=sharing
Some edit comments. Good piece as a whole, very few suggestions.