I like, especially given that the article is in left-wing Salon, that you didn’t feel the need to signal that Trump is evil. This article manages to avoid the normal mind-kill of politics.
Thanks, and I appreciate your feedback on the draft, which helped improve the piece. Yeah, this is rare for a Salon piece that deals with Trump—most are really mindkill. I fought with the editors to make the headline less mindkillery than they wanted it to make.
I like, especially given that the article is in left-wing Salon, that you didn’t feel the need to signal that Trump is evil. This article manages to avoid the normal mind-kill of politics.
Thanks, and I appreciate your feedback on the draft, which helped improve the piece. Yeah, this is rare for a Salon piece that deals with Trump—most are really mindkill. I fought with the editors to make the headline less mindkillery than they wanted it to make.