I’d also suggest trimming or eliminating the citation-style links (they seem a bit overwrought for a personal letter, or really anything aside from a full-blown article, maybe you can just provide 2 or 3 links and an offer of more if he’s interested). Since this is a Hansonian problem of getting noticed, you might want to preferentially retain the links that connote higher status.
You also probably want to say “You have my permission” rather than “You got my permission”.
And I think “e-Mail” is now deprecated in favor of “email” (though I think e-mail is still acceptable).
I’d also suggest trimming or eliminating the citation-style links (they seem a bit overwrought for a personal letter, or really anything aside from a full-blown article, maybe you can just provide 2 or 3 links and an offer of more if he’s interested). Since this is a Hansonian problem of getting noticed, you might want to preferentially retain the links that connote higher status.
You also probably want to say “You have my permission” rather than “You got my permission”.
And I think “e-Mail” is now deprecated in favor of “email” (though I think e-mail is still acceptable).