Day One – “When you wake up at see me not dead” instead of “when you wake up and see me not dead”. I think “and they knew I knew I knew” should be “and they knew I knew they knew”.
Day Two – Missing period between “but we’ve got to do it” and “if we don’t kill ourselves tonight”.
Typo nitpicking:
Day One – “When you wake up at see me not dead” instead of “when you wake up and see me not dead”. I think “and they knew I knew I knew” should be “and they knew I knew they knew”.
Day Two – Missing period between “but we’ve got to do it” and “if we don’t kill ourselves tonight”.