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Richard_Kennaway comments on
Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality discussion thread, part 4
Richard_Kennaway
28 Oct 2010 14:21 UTC
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The sentence would be greatly improved by deleting its last three words.
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The sentence would be greatly improved by deleting its last three words.