The writing style’s still a lot better than your Harry Potter fanfic,
Well, I have to agree with this part of your comment (and laugh at the rest). I like HPatMoR a lot, but there is something about the writing style that disturbs me a bit, even after 68 chapters, although unlike you it’s not a problem I have with anything else Eliezer has ever written, and I’ve read pretty much everything he’s written.
Well, I have to agree with this part of your comment (and laugh at the rest). I like HPatMoR a lot, but there is something about the writing style that disturbs me a bit, even after 68 chapters, although unlike you it’s not a problem I have with anything else Eliezer has ever written, and I’ve read pretty much everything he’s written.