With that paragraph deleted, it was difficult for me (just reading it now) to make the inference connecting your argument to wishful thinking. You might want to spell it out.
I don’t think it’s because I deleted that paragraph. I think it was just unclear. I rewrote the second half.
Much improved, and accordingly upvoted.
With that paragraph deleted, it was difficult for me (just reading it now) to make the inference connecting your argument to wishful thinking. You might want to spell it out.
I don’t think it’s because I deleted that paragraph. I think it was just unclear. I rewrote the second half.
Much improved, and accordingly upvoted.