Perhaps part of you suspects that there is something unspeakably magical about life and existence, but fears that any such ideas are contrary to rationality. It turns out that rationality, if applied to its logical conclusion, is not at odds with this intuition.
Although this is your concluding paragraph, it reads to me like an exciting enticement to read what more you have to say.
Although this is your concluding paragraph, it reads to me like an exciting enticement to read what more you have to say.
Thanks for the feedback! I moved it to the intro and added some stuff.