Thank you for the feedback. Did you know of any similar writing making similar points that were more readable, in your mind? What was an example of a place that you found it meandering or overlong? This could help me improve future drafts. I appreciate your interest, and I’m sorry you felt it wasn’t concise and was overly ‘vibey.’
Thank you for the feedback. Did you know of any similar writing making similar points that were more readable, in your mind? What was an example of a place that you found it meandering or overlong? This could help me improve future drafts. I appreciate your interest, and I’m sorry you felt it wasn’t concise and was overly ‘vibey.’